bhima Wrote:What do you mean by "warm"? It's all just bass to me man... As long as the notes work well and the rhythm fits the drums with it all being at the right level it's all good... Dont know what you mean...
It was made on analogue equipment using floppy disks etc so stuff like "layering" (dont know what you mean by that...?) and oter fancy effects people take for granted these days isnt really feasable to do...
by warm i mean, for want of a better description how deep or concentrated each note sounds.
to me some of those could be fattened up to aid the overall sound of the track and give some cohesiveness - ie the atmosphere is quite deep and evolving so some extra 'warmth' in the bassline would sound good to me.
that's all, nothing really technical [i mean god i know shit about getting stuff to sound the way i hear in my head
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to clarify i like the rhythm and the overall melody, nothing against that. it's hard to say stuff like this with a compressed clip as you can't hear the bass properly or in as great effect so that's why i said earlier i won't be too quick to judge.
regarding layering - i'm not talking about anything fancy here again. all i meant was you could add other sounds [ie another atmosphere or bass note, effect] in every now and then to make it more interesting, or in the case of making the bass warm- adding some low bass underneath the high note and process the finished sound as one.
but that's neither here nor there if you like it as it is
i was just going to say something like 'really good man love this love that' because when i commented to you before about that other tune [endless skies?] , i get the impression of it being like beating a dead horse when it comes to constructive criticism, in that your'e not actually looking for anyone to greatly analyse or go into detail about their viewpoint -moreso just listen to it and pass a thumb up or down.
that's absolutely fine if you want that and i won't waste time typing my opinion in future in such depth if that's the case -just thought it might help you or be what you wanted.
please correct me if i'm wrong about that however becasue i can jump to conclusions too early.
all i will say then is i like forward to the next one