sober now
man i feel rough...
first off, the intro kills it, it's fucking wicked. i like the feel, the groove, the beat pattern, whatever you call it. it's wixxed
need to tighten up your amen though! not tight enough
i think the problem overall is that it's in two keys at once, and for me they just don't really work. the harmony parts on top - basically everything but the bass - are much better notes i reckon. it resolves the problem perfectly in the last part though, it comes together nicely. basically if it were mine i'd be nudging one or two notes of the bassline up or down to make it sit with the rest of the tune in that middle part.
mix-wise, it's pretty mono-fied, well, very mono-fied really. it's not in mono, but everything sits in the exact same part of the mix bar one or two parts and/or the reverb.
so nearly a fucking wicked tune man! it's still good though